Wednesday, 23 January 2013
Production Company Name - Final
Friday, 11 January 2013
Script - 2 Draft
After a few opinions came through from the group about the script our group changed something of the script to come through on a second draft.
A person grabs some food, drink and the TV controller. Just before he sits down he turns on the TV, which is already up full volume. The intro music is played for DS (Death Show).
Tom
Nick
The hacker is killing everybody
by cheating, and then a nuke is dropped on him.
Tom &
Nick
Showing two clips of ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ in action just killing everybody. The two clips are shown at the same time, with a line down the middle.
Shows a four split screen of the game room, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same time.
Nick
Tom
Shows a 20 split screen of the battle location, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same time.
Nick
Tom
Nick
The camera looks down at Europe,
and then slowly descends to the battle location, which then just hovers over the
battle location.
Searches through the cameras to find someone and then locates ‘The LAW’, who is barricading behind a car with a machine gun.
‘Hawk’ just wanders around from a corner in front of the ‘The LAW’, which ‘The LAW’ open fires upon ‘Hawk’, this forces ‘Hawk’ to hide behind the wall.
Tom
Tom
Nick
The ‘Hawk’grabs a grenade, then throws it over to ‘The LAW’ and at the same time shoots at ‘The LAW. This forces ‘The LAW’ to take cover and then gets blown up by the grenade.
Hawk
The
LAW
Tom
Nick
Tom
The commentators draw out what
‘The LAW’ should of done to kill the
‘Hawk’.
Nick
‘The LAW’respawns at a different point of the battle location
Music starts to play, while ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ keeps killing each other in different ways, then scoreboard keeps flipping, while it goes back to the game room looking at Stuart and Mark playing the game.
In the game, both the ‘Hawk’ and
‘The LAW’ are running to the same point, but are unknown of each
other.
Both the‘Hawk’ and ‘The LAW’ stand still and just point their hand guns are each other.
The players in the game starts to jigger out of control, then the whole screen just goes black.
A person grabs some food, drink and the TV controller. Just before he sits down he turns on the TV, which is already up full volume. The intro music is played for DS (Death Show).
Welcome back to DS, if you have just joined
us, the ‘Hawk’ and the remaining champion ‘The LAW’ are tied, with just the
sudden death match to, who will be the 2013
champion.
If any of you are unfamiliar with the sudden
death match, it is the first to 200 points wins the title, but for those have
just joined us, lets show what our severs did to this
hacker.
Ooohhh
Tom
That’s gotta
hurt
Nick
Yh...just before the battle start, let’s look
at how the two finalists got to the
final.
Showing two clips of ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ in action just killing everybody. The two clips are shown at the same time, with a line down the middle.
Tom
These are just two epic fighters, who both
deserve to win.
Nick
Yh, but only one can win and the rest are in
the bin.
Tom
Now let’s have a look at the fighters in the
game room getting ready.
Shows a four split screen of the game room, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same time.
It looks like they are preparing up for what
should be a epic battle
Now let’s have a look at the
location
Shows a 20 split screen of the battle location, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same time.
Tom
There are over 20 cameras in that location, 2
of which are first person of the
players.
Which you at home can select, which camera
you want to see.
Now I think the players are
ready
Now let’s get down to the battle location for
the sudden death match.
Tom
Here we are at the Industrial map, which has
awesome hideouts and advantage points.
Nick
Let’s search through the cameras to find
someone.
Searches through the cameras to find someone and then locates ‘The LAW’, who is barricading behind a car with a machine gun.
Nick
Ah here we go, it seems that ‘The LAW’ is
setting up behind a car with a machine gun.
‘Hawk’ just wanders around from a corner in front of the ‘The LAW’, which ‘The LAW’ open fires upon ‘Hawk’, this forces ‘Hawk’ to hide behind the wall.
That was
close.
Nick
Thought ‘The LAW’ had him there for a
second.
Let’s see how the ‘Hawk’ is going to get out
of this one.
The ‘Hawk’grabs a grenade, then throws it over to ‘The LAW’ and at the same time shoots at ‘The LAW. This forces ‘The LAW’ to take cover and then gets blown up by the grenade.
Take
this.
Ahh
cra...
Ouch, that was
painful.
One of the best kills I have ever
seen.
This shows that we are in for a
treat.
Tom
‘The LAW’ should of gone here and then throw
a grenade.
Yh, which would lead the ‘Hawk’ into this
position, then ‘The LAW’could of just shot him
down.
‘The LAW’respawns at a different point of the battle location
Tom
At least ‘The LAW’ gets another chance to
kill the ‘Hawk’.
Music starts to play, while ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ keeps killing each other in different ways, then scoreboard keeps flipping, while it goes back to the game room looking at Stuart and Mark playing the game.
Nick
You can just see the frustration on both
Stuart and Mark.
Tom
They sure both want to
win.
Tom
Do they know they are running to the same
point?
Nick
I don’t think they
do.
Both the‘Hawk’ and ‘The LAW’ stand still and just point their hand guns are each other.
Nick
Wow, this is a
first.
Tom
It sure
is
The players in the game starts to jigger out of control, then the whole screen just goes black.
Script - Final
After some more initial feed back we came together again and made out final script.an #1 grabs some food, drink an
Tom
Welcome back to DS, if you have just joined us, the ‘Hawk’
and the champion ‘The LAW’ was in a team death match, which both of them had the
highest scores and the rest got killed, which is going to happen to the loser in
this sudden death match.
So now they're going to be in a sudden death match.
A huge title of 'sudden death match' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it.
A video of horizontal split screen, with a lives going down to left to right. With a beep sound every time a life disappears.
Nick
That's what a sudden death match now onto the finalists of
this match.
A huge title of 'finalists' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this two videos appear on the vertical split screen.
These are just two epic fighters, who both deserve to win.
Nick
Now onto the cameras on the
battlefield.
A huge title of 'cameras' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this shows the entire camera visions that are on the battlefield.
There are over 20 cameras on the battlefield, 2 of which
are first person of the players.
A huge title of 'finalists' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this the camera hovers over West Europe, then goes down to south east England. The camera then goes down to Medway, then the camera goes down to Lordswood, and then finally starts to hover over the location. The name of the location and the coordinates appear in.
Here we are at the Industrial map, which has awesome
hideouts and advantage points.
Nick
Let’s see if we can find
anyone.
The camera starts to move left and right, while 'The LAW'
appears from a wall and then quickly hurries to the car, where he crouches and
stays there.
Nick
Ah here we go, it seems that ‘The LAW’ is setting up behind
a car.
‘Hawk’ just wanders around from a corner in front of ‘The
LAW’, which ‘The LAW’ open fires upon ‘Hawk’, this forces ‘Hawk’ to quickly hide
behind the wall.
Tom
That was
close.
Nick
Thought ‘The LAW’ had him there for a
second.
Tom
Nick
Let’s see how the ‘Hawk’ is going to get out of this
one.
The ‘Hawk’ grabs a grenade, then throws it over to ‘The
LAW’ and at the same time shoots at ‘The LAW, while all of this is happening it
is going in slow-motion. This forces ‘The LAW’ to take cover, when 'Hawk' gets
behind the wall the grenade blows up taking 'The LAW with it.
Hawk
Take this.
The LAW
Ahh cra...
Tom
Ouch, that was
painful.
Nick
One of the best kills I have ever
seen.
Tom
This shows that we are in for a
treat.
At least ‘The LAW’ gets another chance to kill the
‘Hawk’.
Music starts to play, while ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ keeps
killing each other in different ways, then the number of lives for both players
keep killing each other.
You can just see the frustration on both Stuart and
Mark.
Tom
They sure both want to
win.
Both the ‘Hawk’and ‘The LAW’ are running to the same point,
but are unknown of each other.
Tom
Do they know they are running to the same
point?
Nick
I don’t think they
do.
Both the ‘Hawk’ and ‘The LAW’ stand still and just point
their hand guns are each other. While the camera does a 360 degree
spin around them both. The music just suddenly stops, without the commentators
it is dead silent.
Nick
Wow, this is a
first.
Tom
It sure is
Then the whole screen goes black, which is a power cut at
the person's house at the start.
Tom
Nick
A huge title of 'sudden death match' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it.
Tom
If you are unaware of a sudden death match, it is two
players who fight to the death, each have 25 lives and there is unlimited time.
A video of horizontal split screen, with a lives going down to left to right. With a beep sound every time a life disappears.
A huge title of 'finalists' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this two videos appear on the vertical split screen.
Tom
A huge title of 'cameras' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this shows the entire camera visions that are on the battlefield.
Nick
Tom
Let's go to the live action on the battlefield, where it
has just started.
A huge title of 'finalists' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. After this the camera hovers over West Europe, then goes down to south east England. The camera then goes down to Medway, then the camera goes down to Lordswood, and then finally starts to hover over the location. The name of the location and the coordinates appear in.
Tom
'Hawk' then runs off camera. 'The LAW' respawns at a
different point of the battlefield.
Tom
Nick
Man#1
NO!
Fig Rig
we ahve been discussin alot about devices and holders we can use for various shots inside of the short film, one way we could improve the smoothness of the overall frame shots is either buying a fig rig, which we wont have the money for or making one out of PVC piping from hand, this will get tid of all the horrible shaking and swaying in when your hands are in direct contact with the video camera and instead smooth out the wobbles so they become none on the les apparent to the eye
Visual Effects
My group member Alex approached me a while back asking how my experience with visual effects and how well couldi use it to give our film a more proffesional touch. He showed me a youtube video and asked if we could get something similair to it in out short film, and i agreed to him that we can.
Production Company Storyboard Ideas
One of our group members was thinking of an initial logo that we could use for out short film, its not too hard undertand and is rather easy to know its basics. but as most things so far this is only a draft of the final product.
Synopsis Final Draft
The film
opens up with a person grabbing some food and drinks, while grabbing the
controller for the TV. As he sits down, he turns on the TV, which sort of shouts
at him. On the TV both players (The LAW & Hawk) appear in a zig-zag vertical
split screen , while the commentators talk about that both 'The LAW' and 'Hawk'
had the highest points in Team Death match and the rest got killed. The
commentators then start to talk about what a sudden death match is and at the
same time a huge title of 'sudden death match' hits the screen, with a metal
sound to it. Then a video of horizontal split screen with lives going down left
to right, with a beep sound every time a life disappears. The commentators then
start to talk about the finalists and showing how good they are, while at the
same time a title 'finalists' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it. Then
two videos appear on a vertical split screen. The commentators then start to
talk about the cameras that are on the battlefield; while at the same time a
title 'cameras' hits the screen, with a metal sound to it, then shows the entire
camera visions that are on the battlefield. The commentator goes back to the
action on the battlefield, with the camera hover over West Europe, then goes
down to South East England. The camera then goes down to Medway, then goes down
to Lordswood and then finally the camera starts to hover over the location, the
name of the location and the coordinates appear in. The commentators starts to
move the camera left and right, while 'The LAW' appears from a wall and then
quickly hurries to the car, where he crouches and stays there. The 'Hawk'
wanders in front of 'The LAW' from a corner, which 'The LAW' open fires upon
'Hawk', this forces 'Hawk' to hide behind the wall, quickly. The 'Hawk' then
grabs a grenade then throws it over to 'The LAW', at the same time runs and
shoots at the 'The LAW'. Just as the 'Hawk' gets behind a wall 'The LAW' gets
blown up. The commentators start to talk about that kill and then 'The LAW'
respawns back into the battlefield. Then 'The LAW' and the 'Hawk' start to kill
each other over and over again, while the commentators continue speaking. 'The
LAW' and the 'Hawk' starts to run to the same point on the battlefield and then
just stop, while pointing their guns at each other, at the same time the camera
does a 360 degree spin around them both. At the same time the music suddenly
just stops, without the commentators speaking it is dead silent. The whole
screen then just goes black, which is a power cut at the Man #1 character's
house.
Synopsis Second Draft
The film
opens up with a person grabbing some food and drinks, while grabbing the
controller for the TV. As he sits down, he turns on the TV, which sort of shouts
at him. On the TV the commentators are talking about what has happened before
the break and then talks about the sudden death match. But just before the
commentators talk about the finalists, they talk about what has happened during
the day. The commentators show a video, which is sped up showing all of the
matches in the day. The commentators then start to talk about on how the two
finalists got into the final, while they are showing a random set of clips that
are showing the good points of both them. The commentators then start talking
about the cameras that are set up at the location, where the finalists are at,
by also showing a video, which is sped up showing all of the cameras visions at
the location, and then they go back to the live action. The camera is then over
looking Europe, slowly descending until it stops and the commentator's show and
tell the location of the battle. First see Stuart aka 'The LAW' barricading
behind a car with a machine gun and Mark aka 'Hawk' pops around the corner and
is unknown of 'The LAW', which 'The LAW' just open fires on the 'Hawk', which
then forces 'Hawk' to hide behind the wall. 'Hawk' then grabs a grenade, and
then throws it over to 'The LAW', while at the same time runs over to another
wall, while shooting at 'The LAW'. This force 'The LAW' to take cover and then
the grenade blows him up. Both sets of lives from both players are being shown,
along with the montage of deaths, then both of them start to run to the same
point, but unknown of each other, then they meet at just point their handguns at
each other, while both 'Hawk' and 'The LAW' are just one death from being dead.
Synopsis First Draft
The film opens with a person grabbing some food and
drinks, while grabbing the controller for the TV. As he its down, he turns on
the TV, which sort of shouts at him. On the TV the commentators are talking
about an hacker, that hacked into one of the games of DS (Death Show), then the
servers (people controlling the game) drop a nuke on the hacker. The
commentators then start talking about on how the two finalists got into the
final, while they are showing a random set of clips that are from the two
finalists. The commentators then start talking about the cameras and also
showing where they are, and then they go back to the live action. The camera is
then over looking Europe, slowly descending until it stops and the commentator's
show and tell the location of the battle. First see Stuart aka 'The LAW'
barricading behind a car with a machine gun and Mark aka 'Hawk' pops around the
corner and is unknown of 'The LAW', which 'The LAW' just open fires on the
'Hawk', which then forces 'Hawk' to hide behind the wall. 'Hawk' then grabs a
grenade, and then throws it over to 'The LAW', while at the same time runs over
to another wall, while shooting at 'The LAW'. This force 'The LAW' to take cover
and then the grenade blows him up. The commentators talk about what 'The LAW'
should of done to kill the 'Hawk', then just a montage of deaths are shown,
while the commentators are being shocked. The scoreboard is being shown along
with the montage of deaths, then seeing the frustration on both Stuart and Mark.
In the game both 'The LAW' and 'Hawk' are running to the same point, but unknown
to each other. Both of them meet round a corner and just stand there pointing
their hand guns at each other, while both the 'Hawk' and 'The LAW' are just one
kill away from winning.
Script - First Draft
One of my group mates got down to writing the script for out film, this is the first draft that came out.
A person grabs some food,
drink and the TV controller. Just before he sits down he turns on the TV, which
is already up full volume. The intro music is played for DS (Death
Show).
Tom
Welcome
back to DS, if you have just joined us, the ‘Hawk’ and the remaining champion
‘The LAW’ are tied, with just the sudden death match to, who will be the 2013
champion.
Nick
If any
of you are unfamiliar with the sudden death match, it is the first to 200 points
wins the title, but for those have just joined us, lets show what our severs did
to this hacker.
The hacker is killing
everybody by cheating, and then a nuke is dropped on him.
Tom
& Nick
Ooohhh
Tom
That’s
gotta hurt
Nick
Yh...just before the
battle start, let’s look at how the two finalists got to the
final.
Showing two clips of ‘The
LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ in action just killing everybody. The two clips are shown at
the same time, with a line down the middle.
Tom
These
are just two epic fighters, who both deserve to
win.
Nick
Yh, but
only one can win and the rest are in the bin.
Tom
Now
let’s have a look at the fighters in the game room getting
ready.
Shows a four split screen
of the game room, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same
time.
Nick
It
looks like they are preparing up for what should be a epic
battle
Tom
Now
let’s have a look at the location
Shows a 20 split screen of
the battle location, looking at what all of the cameras see at the same
time.
Tom
There
are over 20 cameras in that location, 2 of which are first person of the
players.
Nick
Which
you at home can select, which camera you want to
see.
Tom
Now I
think the players are ready
Nick
Now
let’s get down to the battle location for the sudden death
match.
The camera looks down at
Europe, and then slowly descends to the battle location, which then just hovers
over the battle location.
Tom
Here we
are at the Industrial map, which has awesome hideouts and advantage
points.
Nick
Let’s
search through the cameras to find someone.
Searches through the
cameras to find someone and then locates ‘The LAW’, who is barricading behind a
car with a machine gun.
Nick
Ah here
we go, it seems that ‘The LAW’ is setting up behind a car with a machine
gun.
‘Hawk’ just wanders around
from a corner in front of the ‘The LAW’, which ‘The LAW’ open fires upon ‘Hawk’,
this forces ‘Hawk’ to hide behind the wall.
Tom
That
was close.
Nick
Thought
‘The LAW’ had him there for a second.
Tom
Nick
Let’s
see how the ‘Hawk’ is going to get out of this
one.
The ‘Hawk’ grabs a
grenade, then throws it over to ‘The LAW’ and at the same time shoots at ‘The
LAW. This forces ‘The LAW’ to take cover and then gets blown up by the
grenade.
Hawk
Take
this.
The
LAW
Ahh
cra...
Tom
Ouch,
that was painful.
Nick
One of
the best kills I have ever seen.
Tom
This
shows that we are in for a treat.
The commentators draw out
what ‘The LAW’ should of done to kill the
‘Hawk’.
Tom
‘The
LAW’ should of gone here and then throw a grenade.
Nick
Yh,
which would lead the ‘Hawk’ into this position, then ‘The LAW’ could of just
shot him down.
‘The LAW’ respawns at a
different point of the battle location
Tom
At
least ‘The LAW’ gets another chance to kill the
‘Hawk’.
Music starts to play,
while ‘The LAW’ and the ‘Hawk’ keeps killing each other in different ways, then
scoreboard keeps flipping, while it goes back to the game room looking at Stuart
and Mark playing the game.
Nick
You can
just see the frustration on both Stuart and
Mark.
Tom
They
sure both want to win.
In the game, both the
‘Hawk’ and ‘The LAW’ are running to the same point, but are unknown of each
other.
Tom
Do they
know they are running to the same point?
Nick
I don’t
think they do.
Both the ‘Hawk’ and ‘The
LAW’ stand still and just point their hand guns are each other.
Nick
Wow,
this is a first.
Tom
It sure
is
Nick
I
wander who is going to shoot first.
Wednesday, 9 January 2013
How To Gun Fight - Tutorial
A youtuber channel called ‘samandniko’, which does loads of
short videos. Even though I know how to do a basic gun fight, I wanted to make
sure if there was anything else I was missing out to do a good looking gun
fight. So I located this video, which told me a few more tips on how to do a
good looking gun fight.
Target Audience
·
Unknown - 15 ·
Death Race - 15 ·
The Expendables 2 - 15 ·
VGHS (Video Game High School) -
12 ·
Gamer - 18 ·
Final Armageddon Dot Com -
PG
By
looking at these films we can see that Action short/features films are mostly at
a 15 certificate. So this gives our group a starting point for our target
audience. All of us feel that our film will appeal to both male and female
audiences that are interested in the Action genre.
So after looking at similar existing films, we can see that our short film target audience will be best suited for 15 - 30 year olds both male and female. However our group understands that this target audience will not include everyone from the age range.
So after looking at similar existing films, we can see that our short film target audience will be best suited for 15 - 30 year olds both male and female. However our group understands that this target audience will not include everyone from the age range.
Cast
In our short
film there is going to be at least four characters that the audience see’s and
another two, which is just going to be narrator voices(Commentators), so in total there is going to be
at least six characters. As our group thought of this idea for the short film,
Me and Matt weren’t keen on acting. As I was talking to
my group about the parts that was going to be in this short film, there was one
part where Matt wanted do. There was two parts, which was going to the main two
characters in the short film. So Alex quickly said that he was going to be one of
the main characters, then he got home that day he was going to ask his brother (as he
does drama outside of school) if he could be in the short film and he also
agreed.
·
Tom
(Commentator) - Callumn
·
Nick
(Commentator) - Matt
·
Man
#1 - Matt
·
'The
LAW' (Mark) - Alex
·
'Hawk'
(Stuart) - Luke
Monday, 7 January 2013
Location - Research
With this location, it is the only place that our group actually discussed with each other. There are multiple reasons for this location; the first one is that I told the rest of the group that no ones working there on Sunday, so that would be the best day to do some filming. The second one is that it is quite far away from any houses, so when we are filming we aren't going to get stop nearly all the time. The third one is that this location is only about 5 - 10 minutes away from where our group lives.
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